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The Cloud Temple (sample)

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I’m really sorry for the lack of updates lately. I’ve been working hard on the new set release for my Patreon.

The set was done today, 31 multi-panel pages inside. Now I just need to fix the text a bit here and there, as my English is very crappy.

All my patrons above $5 tier will get a copy of this set in the next few days. For you who haven’t, you might want to take a peek at my Patreon profile, and maybe I’m worthy enough to win your support?

There’s still time before the end of the month to get a copy, so, what do you waiting for? :P

If you decided to support me, 20% off discount code of all my old rewards listed on Gumroad is yours too! :D


PS: The image was a page from my latest commercial release, The Cloud Temple. You can get them too via Rotica or Gumroad.

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FirstDarkAngel2001's avatar
The rendering, the lights in the showing of the tropical/jungle scene, and the shadows are beautifully done. The sheen on the textures for the male and female make it look like they had a fight, and so sweat naturally makes the body have such an effect. The texture on the shorts, mainly the rip area to make them shorts, are phenomenal, the posing being excellent in the manners of making sure that nothing looks off for the bends. 

The only 2 problems being that she is close to revealing herself on the lower half[can't say it bluntly because of embarrassment and shyness], and thusly perhaps making a little maturity filter because of deviantart, and of right under her breast in the second shot, as well. Did the tank top have to modify itself for the added breast size? o.0

I'm sry if it seems I'm being mean. :( Not trying to be mean, I just wanted to help in giving an honest critique.